To cover her
embarrassment, Joan looks down at the outfit Abby has chosen for her.
It is a silver
dress with a flowing skirt and a tight bodice that only covers her right
shoulder and lops around underneath her left armpit. Where the left sleeve is
non-existent, the right one goes right down to her waist. The skirt is wavy and
reaches all the way down to about halfway between her knees and ankles. The
shoes are silver like the dress and while very flat, technically count as high
heels or perhaps just heels. Joan doesn’t know for sure.
“Wow,” says
Joan, slightly stunned, “I look brilliant.”
“That you do
dear,” replies Leo as he pulls her towards him, “Are you okay?”
“Nothing much,”
answers Joan as she rests her head against Leo’s shoulder, “I was just thinking
about how powerless and helpless I am against parahumans. You know how it is?”
“Not personally,
but I understand where you’re coming from,” replies Leo as they walk towards
the gates leading to the mansion, “With my power, I never have to worry about
mental things such as people messing with my mind or taking control of my body.
And physical things, well. I’m a D+ Bellator with some C- elements when it
comes to speed, reaction times and that sort of stuff so normal folks can’t
match me. And when it comes to parahumans, I just invent things to even the
playing fields. As a result, I don’t know what it is like to be powerless and
helpless. Not like a normal person would anyway.”
Man, Leo really is super ultra awesome. And he is all
mine. Mine and Jaylyn that is.
“You are so
cool,” gushes Joan as Leo pushes a button and the gates open, “The thing is
that I’m not bothered by my sisters using their powers on me. I don’t mind
family using their powers to mess with me a little. In fact, I’m usually
encouraging them to. It’s just, well, I enjoy it when it is someone I trust,
but if it were a stranger...”
“I know what you
mean,” says Leo as Joan tightens her grip on his hand, “It is okay when family
or close friends do it, but is awful and terrifying somebody you don’t know or
don’t trust does it. I can think of a few things like that. And if a stranger
does try to use their powers to mess with you, they’ll only do so once.”
At that last
part, Joan looks up at Leo’s face just in time to glimpse a dangerous look to
his face before it goes away.
Whoa. I’ve never seen Leo look like that. Others have
told me about what Leo can get like and I’ve seen Gears in action, but never
seen that side to Leo before.
***
“Hello Joan!
Hello Leo!” Abby greets them as the duo enters the entrance hall of the
building.
It is so weird thinking of this place as home. I grew
up here, but I spent the last two years of my life confined to a single room.
Now it feels like a place where some rich people live and I don’t belong. Leo’s
base feels more like home than here.
Man does Abby look so freaking beautiful.
Abby is wearing
a stunning white evening gown to go with her stunning figure. Her hair is done
up at the back in a bun with it going in swirls along the side. Just looking at
her makes Joan feel pathetic.
I’m going to be the only girl without curves here.
Even Breanne naturally has D cups and an hourglass figure. I’m so flat I don’t
even need to wear bras.
“Hell Abigail,”
replies Leo with a slight bow, “What are you doing out here?”
“Since I’m the
only one without a date tonight, I’m greeting people as they come in,” explains
Abby, “You guys are the second couple to arrive. Mum and Dad were already here
while Marcy and Diana have already arrived.”
“Diana?”
inquires Joan as she doesn’t know anybody called Diana.
“Marcy’s
girlfriend,” answers Abby.
“Wait, Marcy’s
bi?” asks Joan, confused as she remembers Marcy only dating boys in the past, “Since when?”
“Since her
manifestation,” answers Abby, “Same with me, Alex and Irwin. Mum and Dad are
still straight by the way.”
“So how is
Alexis?” asks Leo.
“She is getting
better,” replies Abby, “Soon she will be able to walk without using her
flight.”
Joan is silent
as she thinks about Alex. Her superhero sister survived the fight with
Armageddon, but both of her legs were shattered. While her regeneration means
that she will get better, the extent of the injuries means that even a week
later, Alex isn’t fully healed.
At least Alex can use her flight to hover so she
doesn’t need a wheelchair or clutches. And it could have been worse. Alexandria
is still in hospital for example while Iceforge lost half of her right leg and
they almost had to remove the other half. I’m surprised that more didn’t die
against Armageddon. I know Leo said that the Harbinger was holding back, but
still...
“Just so you
know, Diana is another Abnormal and without any shapeshifting or other method
to appear normal,” says Abby as she walks inwards with them, leaving a
duplicate behind to stand guard at the entrance, “She is also a singer with
Siren Voice as one of her powers. In addition to dating, Marcy and Diana are
planning to start a band together.”
“What is Diana
like?” asks Joan nervously.
So my main thoughts whilst writing and proofreading this is how hard it is to write things following the voice of a character, especially when the character views thing differently from you.
ReplyDeleteFor Legacy, I try and write her as a black and white point of view that understands grey that is rather utilitarian and takes weird things in her stride, treating them as normal.
For Leo, I try and write him as a smart and logical person who has weirdness happen around him and to him and treating such weirdness as normal if acknowledging it as weird. I also try and give him a hint of over-protectiveness when it comes to his loved ones.
For Joan, I always pictured her a typical girl who quickly accepts the new weirdness of the world and embraces it. Of these three, I found her the hardest to write as her perspective is the furthest from my own. Just imagine my joy when I realised that girls and boys didn't have any inherent differences in how they spoke!
Speaking of my own perspective, one of the things I try and do is avoid having characters that share my view of the world. It helps that characters that have similar viewpoints to my own soon diverge as events happen to them in the story.
Anyway, I haven't actually spoken much about this segment. Plot wise, it doesn't do much, but character wise, it helps show Joan's perspective on the world.
Next time, Joan meets her sister Marcelle and her girlfriend Diana.